Interesting Premise

Pros: A love story that unfolds realistically. A MC you empathize with. A potential spouse you adore. An idyllic setting in frosty Idaho. Cons: Inconsistencies with Rachel's feelings toward parents. Unrealistic portrayal of parents--overly cruel and immature. Paulson springs details upon us after she's introduced an idea, leaving us a shade confused. Formatting and word choice are a bit rough. The story starts out thin and rambly with no real sense of direction. It gets a lot better when we get to Idaho where Rachel's character experiences a lot of growth and we get to see the wonderful person she is.